Hmmm...this left me speechless....partly because thoda samajh nahi aaya (linguistically challenged...u see)....and partly because it was very good....and the narrow minded person that I am, here's a suggestion...chod naukri waukri...kya strategy wagarah karegi...kitaabein likh...we could plan a business around selling them...and i am very serious when i say that....
But i dont want the splash of your colours...i agree it was Holi this weekend..but then, i think i can take the color of the sky and the crimson of the sun from my own fingers...nice post...though not your best...lil funny..he he :D
Is the loviest piece of writing I've read in a long time. It was like the gentle river moving with grace....It reminded me of the feelings I had within while reading the words of "Oriah Mountain Dreamer" for the first time in my life. Thank you.
Oneday...you will write for a larger audience...a book perhaps...I am certain about it.
u have a verdant imagination, Namrata. I've been reading your blogs for quite sometime. I think I am addicted to them. Try and post more often.-kadambari
There's an old saying in Hindi which goes like this "Gaand Mein Damn Nahin Hum Kisise Kum Nahin". Buggers you don't have the guts to identify yourself aur nikla saala ladki pe line marne.. But one thing is there, I'm more entertained by your comments then the contents of her blog. Especially the idiot who offers to plunge into the book business. ;-))
madiraalay jaane ko ghar se, chaltaa hae peene waalaa kis path se jaaoon asamanjas, mein hae woh bholaabhaalaa alag alag path batalaate sab, par maen yeh batalaataa hun raah pakad tu eka chalaachal, paa jaa aega madhushaalaa
sun kalkal chhalchhal, madhughat se girti, praanon mein haalaa sun runjhun runjhun jal vitaran, karti madhusati baalaa bas aa ponhche door nahin kutchh, chaar kadam ab chalna hae behak rahe sun peene waale, mehak rahi le madhushaalaa
lal sura si dhaar lapatetee, keh na ise dena jwalaa Yeh nil madira hae mat isko, keh dena ur ka chhaalaa dard nashaa hae is madira ka, vigat smrutiyan saaqi hein peeda mein aanand jise ho, aaey meri MADHUSHAALAA
dharm granth sab jalaa chuki hein, jiske bheetar ki jwalaa mandir, masjid, girje sab kuchh, toade chuka jo matwaalaa pandit, momin, padariyon ke, phandon ko jo kaat chuka kar sakti hae aaj usi ka, swaagat meri MADHUSHAALAA
Laalaa in adharon se jisne, haay nahein choomi haalaa harshit kampit kar se jisne, haay na chhuwaa madhu ka pyaalaa haath pakad lajjit saaqi ka, paas nahein jisne kheenchaa vyarth sukhaa daali jeevan ki, usne madhumaya MADHUSHAALAA.
bane pujaari premi saaqi, gangaajal pawan haalaa rahe pherata avirat gati se, madhu ke pyaalon ki maalaa aur liye jaa, aur piye jaa, isi mantra ka jaap kare maen Shiv ki pratimaa ban baethun, mandir ho yeh MADHUSHAALAA.
aek baras mein aek baar hi jalti holi ki jwaalaa aek bar hi lagti baazi, jagti deepon ki maalaa duniya waalo kintu kisi din, aa madiraalaya mein dekho din ko holi raat diwali, roze manati MADHUSHAALAA.
adharon par ho koee bhi ras, jiwha par lagti haalaa han jag ho koee haathon mein, lagta rakkha hae pyaalaa har surat saaqi ki surat, mein parivartit ho jaati aankhon ke aage ho kuchh bhi, aankhon mein hae MADHUSHAALAA.
sumukhi tumhara sundar mukh hi, mujh ko kanchan kaa pyaalaa chhalak rahi hae, jisme, maNik roop madhur maadak haalaa maen hi saaqi banta maen hi, peene waala banta hun jahan kahin mil baethe ham tum, vahin gaee ho MADHUSHAALAA
do din hee madhu mujhe pilaa kar, oob uthi saaqi baalaa bhar kar ab khiska daetee hae, woh merae aage pyaalaa naaz-o-adaa andaazon se ab, haae pilaanaa door huwaa ab to kar detee hae kewal, farz-adaaee MADHUSHAALAA
chhote se jeevan mein kitnaa, pyaar karoon, pee loon haalaa aane ke hi saath jagat mein, kahlaayaa jaane waalaa swaagat ke hi saath bidaa ki, hoatee dekhee tayyaari band lagee hone khulate hi, maeri jeevan MADHUSHAALAA.
shaant saki ho kab tak saaqi, pee kar kis ur ki jwaalaa aur aur ki raTan lagaataa, jaataa har peene waalaa kitni ichchhaaen, har jaane waalaa chhod yahan jaataa kitne armaanon ki ban kar, qabra khadee hae MADHUSHAALAA.
Yam aaegaa saaqi ban kar, saath liye kaali haalaa pee na hoash mein phir aaegaa, sura visudh yah matwaalaa yah antim behoashi, antim saaqi, antim pyaala hae pathik pyaar se peena isko, phir na milaegi MADHUSHAALAA.
girti jaati hae din prati-din, praNayani praNon ki haalaa bhagna huwa jaata din prati-din, shubhage mera tan pyaala rooTh raha hae mujhse roopasi, din din yauwan ka saaqi sookh rahi hae din din sundari, meri jeevan MADHUSHAALAA.
maere adharon par ho antim, vastu na tulsidal pyaalaa maeri jiwha par ho antim, vastu na gangaajal haalaa maere shav ke peechhe chalne waalo, yaad ise rakhnaa Ram naam hae satya na kehnaa, kehnaa sachchee MADHUSHAALAA
maere shav par vah roae ho, jiske aansoo mein haalaa aah bhare voh ho jo surbhit, madiraa pee kar matwaalaa daen mujhko ve kandha jinke, pag-mag-dag-mag hoate hoan aur jaloon us Thaor jahan par, kabhi rahi ho MADHUSHAALAA
Your lightweight eloquence apart, there is hardly anything serious about MANAGEMENT in all your posts (I read _all_ your posts in 20 minutes flat). I mean, one first needs nerves of steel to plonk down 15+ lacs on an ISB MBA (possibly the most expensive degree in India), and now you think you're probably not MBA material?! Speechless.
ISB - hyd.. A dream for many Managment professionals. You are there with different outlook. It seems like roaring sky in romantic wether. If someone like you have power to express yourself so well that your thoughts get eaisly gel with heart-beats of many creative, innovative and self dipolamatic BOYS. However.. the plot of entire blogs is Same..I mean the WORD "I". Each sentence starts and ends with the same. YOU force your readers to imagine each feelings and emotions from your outlook. Many of us skip reading such articles. I agree with Chetan Bhagat as he said " I write for others, to entertain them, I try write interactive and not impressive." Request you try something called HE,SHE, It, THEY OR WE oR YOU and offcourse your favourate I. Take it in positive spirit. All the best.. expecting to see some more blogs.....
Thanks everyone for all the kind comments..I hope you keep visiting A small request though, I dont want to make my comment space, a reflection of my orkut scrapbook when just about anyone could post whatever they liked... So please do refrain from personal comments about others who comment on this blog.. Of course comments for my writing are always welcome :)
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Hmmm...this left me speechless....partly because thoda samajh nahi aaya (linguistically challenged...u see)....and partly because it was very good....and the narrow minded person that I am, here's a suggestion...chod naukri waukri...kya strategy wagarah karegi...kitaabein likh...we could plan a business around selling them...and i am very serious when i say that....
what more I can ask for...what more I would want...
tc
But i dont want the splash of your colours...i agree it was Holi this weekend..but then, i think i can take the color of the sky and the crimson of the sun from my own fingers...nice post...though not your best...lil funny..he he :D
Hey Sweetie...
Is the loviest piece of writing I've read in a long time. It was like the gentle river moving with grace....It reminded me of the feelings I had within while reading the words of "Oriah Mountain Dreamer" for the first time in my life. Thank you.
Oneday...you will write for a larger audience...a book perhaps...I am certain about it.
Raju, The Gentleman
u have a verdant imagination, Namrata. I've been reading your blogs for quite sometime. I think I am addicted to them. Try and post more often.-kadambari
@ All anonymous commenters
There's an old saying in Hindi which goes like this "Gaand Mein Damn Nahin Hum Kisise Kum Nahin".
Buggers you don't have the guts to identify yourself aur nikla saala ladki pe line marne..
But one thing is there, I'm more entertained by your comments then the contents of her blog. Especially the idiot who offers to plunge into the book business. ;-))
I'll let my thoughts drenched in holi colors to paint your silhouette ..
I'll let your colors to spill and jump to splash on my thoughts ..
madiraalay jaane ko ghar se, chaltaa hae peene waalaa
kis path se jaaoon asamanjas, mein hae woh bholaabhaalaa
alag alag path batalaate sab, par maen yeh batalaataa
hun raah pakad tu eka chalaachal, paa jaa aega madhushaalaa
sun kalkal chhalchhal, madhughat se girti, praanon mein haalaa
sun runjhun runjhun jal vitaran, karti madhusati baalaa
bas aa ponhche door nahin kutchh, chaar kadam ab chalna
hae behak rahe sun peene waale, mehak rahi le madhushaalaa
lal sura si dhaar lapatetee, keh na ise dena jwalaa
Yeh nil madira hae mat isko, keh dena ur ka chhaalaa
dard nashaa hae is madira ka, vigat smrutiyan saaqi hein
peeda mein aanand jise ho, aaey meri MADHUSHAALAA
dharm granth sab jalaa chuki hein, jiske bheetar ki jwalaa
mandir, masjid, girje sab kuchh, toade chuka jo matwaalaa
pandit, momin, padariyon ke, phandon ko jo kaat chuka
kar sakti hae aaj usi ka, swaagat meri MADHUSHAALAA
Laalaa in adharon se jisne, haay nahein choomi haalaa
harshit kampit kar se jisne, haay na chhuwaa madhu ka pyaalaa
haath pakad lajjit saaqi ka, paas nahein jisne kheenchaa
vyarth sukhaa daali jeevan ki, usne madhumaya MADHUSHAALAA.
bane pujaari premi saaqi, gangaajal pawan haalaa
rahe pherata avirat gati se, madhu ke pyaalon ki maalaa
aur liye jaa, aur piye jaa, isi mantra ka jaap kare
maen Shiv ki pratimaa ban baethun, mandir ho yeh MADHUSHAALAA.
aek baras mein aek baar hi jalti holi ki jwaalaa
aek bar hi lagti baazi, jagti deepon ki maalaa
duniya waalo kintu kisi din, aa madiraalaya mein dekho
din ko holi raat diwali, roze manati MADHUSHAALAA.
adharon par ho koee bhi ras, jiwha par lagti haalaa
han jag ho koee haathon mein, lagta rakkha hae pyaalaa
har surat saaqi ki surat, mein parivartit ho jaati
aankhon ke aage ho kuchh bhi, aankhon mein hae MADHUSHAALAA.
sumukhi tumhara sundar mukh hi, mujh ko kanchan kaa pyaalaa
chhalak rahi hae, jisme, maNik roop madhur maadak haalaa
maen hi saaqi banta maen hi, peene waala banta hun
jahan kahin mil baethe ham tum, vahin gaee ho MADHUSHAALAA
do din hee madhu mujhe pilaa kar, oob uthi saaqi baalaa
bhar kar ab khiska daetee hae, woh merae aage pyaalaa
naaz-o-adaa andaazon se ab, haae pilaanaa door huwaa
ab to kar detee hae kewal, farz-adaaee MADHUSHAALAA
chhote se jeevan mein kitnaa, pyaar karoon, pee loon haalaa
aane ke hi saath jagat mein, kahlaayaa jaane waalaa
swaagat ke hi saath bidaa ki, hoatee dekhee tayyaari
band lagee hone khulate hi, maeri jeevan MADHUSHAALAA.
shaant saki ho kab tak saaqi, pee kar kis ur ki jwaalaa
aur aur ki raTan lagaataa, jaataa har peene waalaa
kitni ichchhaaen, har jaane waalaa chhod yahan jaataa
kitne armaanon ki ban kar, qabra khadee hae MADHUSHAALAA.
Yam aaegaa saaqi ban kar, saath liye kaali haalaa
pee na hoash mein phir aaegaa, sura visudh yah matwaalaa
yah antim behoashi, antim saaqi, antim pyaala hae
pathik pyaar se peena isko, phir na milaegi MADHUSHAALAA.
girti jaati hae din prati-din, praNayani praNon ki haalaa
bhagna huwa jaata din prati-din, shubhage mera tan pyaala
rooTh raha hae mujhse roopasi, din din yauwan ka saaqi
sookh rahi hae din din sundari, meri jeevan MADHUSHAALAA.
maere adharon par ho antim, vastu na tulsidal pyaalaa
maeri jiwha par ho antim, vastu na gangaajal haalaa
maere shav ke peechhe chalne waalo, yaad ise rakhnaa
Ram naam hae satya na kehnaa, kehnaa sachchee MADHUSHAALAA
maere shav par vah roae ho, jiske aansoo mein haalaa
aah bhare voh ho jo surbhit, madiraa pee kar matwaalaa
daen mujhko ve kandha jinke, pag-mag-dag-mag hoate hoan
aur jaloon us Thaor jahan par, kabhi rahi ho MADHUSHAALAA
@ Namrata
Ha Ha...I knew that at least one idiot will be hit where it hurts most & that's what happened :-)
@ Vivek
Beta, mujhe lagta hai mere jis body part ke baareih mein tum refer kar rahe ho woh tumhare paas nahi hai ;-)
@ All
I promise to keep entertaining all of you only if my pal Vivek continues to cooperate in future, which I'm sure he will ;-)))
Your lightweight eloquence apart, there is hardly anything serious about MANAGEMENT in all your posts (I read _all_ your posts in 20 minutes flat). I mean, one first needs nerves of steel to plonk down 15+ lacs on an ISB MBA (possibly the most expensive degree in India), and now you think you're probably not MBA material?! Speechless.
ISB - hyd.. A dream for many Managment professionals. You are there with different outlook. It seems like roaring sky in romantic wether. If someone like you have power to express yourself so well that your thoughts get eaisly gel with heart-beats of many creative, innovative and self dipolamatic BOYS. However.. the plot of entire blogs is Same..I mean the WORD "I". Each sentence starts and ends with the same. YOU force your readers to imagine each feelings and emotions from your outlook. Many of us skip reading such articles. I agree with Chetan Bhagat as he said " I write for others, to entertain them, I try write interactive and not impressive."
Request you try something called HE,SHE, It, THEY OR WE oR YOU and offcourse your favourate I.
Take it in positive spirit.
All the best.. expecting to see some more blogs.....
nice blog..u can easily become a writer.
..didnt understand any of the last post,though.Too "reddish" for me..i guess.
Thanks everyone for all the kind comments..I hope you keep visiting
A small request though, I dont want to make my comment space, a reflection of my orkut scrapbook when just about anyone could post whatever they liked...
So please do refrain from personal comments about others who comment on this blog..
Of course comments for my writing are always welcome :)
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